“He drew me like gravity.”
Attraction doesn’t always make sense. Why that slightly dorky guy standing in line to buy coffee will appeal instead of the hunk at the table is a mystery. Have you ever gone shopping in a crowded mall and met the gaze of a complete stranger and felt a tug, an unexpected awareness that makes you take a second, longer look? C’mon, admit it…you know you have.
Being a writer gives you the opportunity to explore the attraction between your characters and make sense out of the inexplicable – at least in your book. From the first time they meet until the HEA we delve into their emotions, dance around their confusion and resistance to each other and help them understand why that sizzle of awareness exists. We don’t leave it as a passing glance and mild curiosity. Where would be the fun in that?
Most of us like to put complete opposites together. The resulting fireworks can be fun. We take characters whose lives have been so completely different there is little common ground and root for them to find their way.
In Rayven’s Keep I took a naïve young woman and threw her in a situation so far outside her experience she didn’t know how to cope. Add in a cynical, driven man, an instant attraction and throw them alone together onboard a ship traveling to the end of their star system. Ahh, now it gets interesting.
They can’t hide from each other, can’t walk away or slam a door for privacy. Petty grievances can fester, feelings can be hurt and underneath it all is that simmer of attraction making it impossible to ignore the ache of unfulfilled desire.
Below is an excerpt from my book. Tru is struggling with the knowledge she is attracted to Nick. I hope you enjoy 🙂
Excerpt from Rayven’t Keep:
Tru edged away from the callscreen. She hated being caught between two powerful, determined men. Even Callen and Seth watched intently, their stances showing they were alert to every nuance. It made the hair at the nape of her neck stand on end.
“I’m also sure you know my reputation and it means more to you than any official report, which can be easily manipulated. You also know I’m going to put a serious dent in your funds to protect Tru. I don’t work for free. Let me do my job, Creighton. I’m very good at it.”
Tru uttered a small, shocked protest before clamping her mouth shut. She glanced at Nick, but his attention was focused on her grandfather.
“It seems like we understand each other.” The smile dropped from his face to be replaced with something more genuine. “I assume you have a plan for protecting my granddaughter and flushing out the bastards at Lodestone?”
Tru didn’t stick around to hear the details, slipping unnoticed out of the room while all attention was on Nick. She resented being the topic of conversation without any consideration being given to her opinion. To think Nick thought of her as just another job to be done with a hefty payout at completion stung. The fact she’d intended to hire him herself didn’t matter and was beside the point.
What she was feeling wasn’t logical, but her emotions were in turmoil and logic was a distant memory. Confused and off balance, she sought a peaceful place to think and, if she were being honest with herself, to sulk. Muttering unladylike imprecations under her breath about Nick, and men in general, she went outside to get some fresh air.
Sundown set the sky on fire with streaks of deep purple and scarlet. The humidity had lessened along with the oppressive heat of earlier in the day. Night creatures stirred, their rustling in the shrubbery drawing her attention and making her nervous. She wasn’t familiar with the wildlife on Alludra and opted to remain close to the house. She wandered along the path she’d walked up earlier in the day surprised to realize it hadn’t been that long ago. So much had changed in such a short time and she acknowledged her rash decisions had put her here. She couldn’t blame Nick. He’d been direct and honest with her from the beginning.
Miserable, she clasped her arms around her waist and stared unseeing at the darkening landscape. She’d never met anyone quite like him before and the attraction she felt had been immediate. She didn’t know why her heart insisted on skipping a beat whenever he was close, or why she found the scar near his eye charming. He didn’t smile, ordered her about without compunction and treated her like a nuisance.
But, he’d also shown gentleness on the ship when she cried and offered gruff comfort when she told him what happened on Lodestone. His touch sent shivers down her spine, while warmth pooled low in her abdomen. She had no control over her reaction, didn’t fully understand all it meant, but there was no denying what she felt.
Sighing, finding no solution to her mixed emotions, Tru turned to go back to the house and ran smack into an immovable, solid wall. Strong arms grabbed her and pulled her close, preventing her fall. It took a moment for her brain to catch up and recognize what her body already realized.
Nick. Warm, solid and holding her too close. Her heart stuttered once before settling into a steady rhythm and her forehead dropped against the hard wall of his chest. She relished the contact even though she knew she should move away.
While I like a little more peace and harmony in real life, the fire and gasoline thing is always fun for characters. Throw ’em together and watch the whoosh!
I couldn’t agree more 🙂 Loved the way you put it, btw.
Good writing! Fun read! I like your heroine!!!
Thanks, Vonnie! I appreciate it 🙂
Mmmm, good excerpt. I like your description of the evening. – Jessica
Hi Jessica! Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed the excerpt.